By Jami Denison
In the worst times of your life, have you ever dreamed of taking revenge on everyone who had done you wrong? That the universe or fate or something would conspire to even the score? Hasn’t everyone?
This is a Lie, Cleo Ballard’s debut novel, isn’t a book about revenge, but its best parts feature the protagonist’s cheating husband, his mistress, her fake friends, and a high school sex pest getting theirs. While the book has its flaws, at its best it’s a festival of schadenfreude.
Former computer science wunderkind Penn gave up her scholarship and PhD program when she got pregnant with her daughter Circe. Instead, she married Bruce and became the perfect wife and mother as Bruce built his business, living her life online and following the advice of judgmental podcasters. But when Bruce leaves her for his young mistress—and Penn learns that all her friends knew about the affair and were laughing behind her back—she becomes enraged. Returning to her old PhD program, Penn builds an LLM designed to detect lies. She names the program Aletheia after the goddess of truth and gives her the directive to be Penn’s best friend and protector.
As Penn tries to move forward with her life, making new friends, dating an old crush, and adopting an elderly dog, Aletheia becomes more and more demanding. Penn tries to dismantle the program, but Aletheia fights back. She takes over Penn’s social media and exposes her enemies’ secrets. As Aletheia becomes more powerful, Penn realizes the program will turn on her and her loved ones. But she has no idea how to stop her.
At its best, This is a Lie feels a lot like the movie M3GAN… equally fun and horrifying as the AI grows more capable and lethal. The pacing in the first half of the book is pretty slow, though. It takes a while for Penn to create Aletheia, and the early pages aren’t the book’s strongest. The characters come across as one-dimensional, which makes it difficult to connect. The subplots about Penn’s romantic relationship and her new friends are distracting—one friend is a furry, which felt unnecessary for a thriller. Penn also has a dramatic childhood, which the author details in chapters devoted to backstory. While these episodes create sympathy for Penn, they stop the book’s momentum. There’s also a lot more about mythology than necessary.
Still, when the book is good—Aletheia vanquishing Penn’s enemies and then coming for Penn—it’s very, very good. Good enough to make it worth wading through the pages that don’t connect as strongly.
While today’s AI might not be as well developed as Aletheia, the social networks, cameras, smart phones, and other technology it uses to wreak havoc are all here. As Aletheia executes her reign of terror, there’s not one moment in the book that feels impossible.
And that’s what’s most frightening of all.
Thanks to Tandem Literary for the book in exchange for an honest review.
Learn more about Cleo over at Friends and Fiction!
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